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Re: What I Wish I'd Know Sooner
Thanks for the review guys!!!:D
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: It's called a lie.
hey... It was so good!!! I instantly loved it... just beyond brilliant to me... the deapth of emotion had me lost in it... a very very good job...!!:D
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: The Secret Life of Superheroes
hey... It was such a funny and good poem that I just couldn't find anything wrong... very well written:)
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: -Deleted-
hi.. Nice poem.. very good indeed. maybe the lines should have been a bit shorter. That's all... Good work:)
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: My guardian angel
hi... your poem is really very beautiful.. except for that little spelling error Amberla93 has mentioned, it was very good piece... good job:)
Mar 29, 2011 -
Re: Small to Me.
hi... Yours is a very nice poem... The rhyme scheme was good and topic was good too... the flow was really smooth and I really couldn't detect any flaw... So ...
Mar 29, 2011 -
Re: Do you know her?
Hey...!! I'm really grateful to every one for the help. Thank you so very much... We'll work together on it and honestly Lava has done the most of it... I'm ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: ..
Hey!! I just read your poem and found it very nice... The depth had me captured and made it a good thing... Good job!!:)
Mar 26, 2011 -
Re: I've Got the Coffee Blues
hi... I really like your poem..!! its very nice indeed..!!! fun reading!!!
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: That Sacred Slut
hi... Your poem was very deep and intense...But good also... I liked it and the details you have added made it a better experience... Darkness was good and nice and ...
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: Madness
wow!! this was a really nice piece of work... I don't think anything was wrong at all... Love it!!! :D
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: Perseverance Never Lies
Hi... God I've seriously become addicted to your works... Its so brilliant and deep...!!! And this one was specifically good.. The flow was smooth and gentle and so was the ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Perseverance Never Lies
Hi... God I've seriously become addicted to your works... Its so brilliant and deep...!!! And this one was specifically good.. The flow was smooth and gentle and so was the ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: all these tangled thorns
well... You've done very good with the imagery.. And it was very deep felt but I got a bit confused regarding the inspiration for writing this poem...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: "Things I Don't Like" by Death
Hi!! this was really great and brilliant..!!! Loved it... Never thought Death could also hate things!!:p
Mar 21, 2011
