harshita3chaarag

Hi there.. So I was a bit intrigued because I have also written a poem called 'Letting Go' ( not put on YWS yet).. I think the concept was good. ...

Hello.. Well since I've never spoken or read or heard Spanish (except on TV), I can't comment on the Spanish version.. I was clueless in that.. But I just loved ...

Hello.. You know I really like these lyrics.. Specially the Chorus.. And I love the word play In para 1 in the last 2-3 lines.. Its a bit confusing, yup, ...

so this is a good poem you've put.. Though I would give you the same advice as the reviewer before me.. I think besides that it was really good... The ...

Hi.. Your lyrics are really good.. I loved the emotions emanating from it the whole while.. you've expressed them brilliantly.. The only thing I thought could be changed for the ...

Hi again.. So I was immediately captured.. I did find a few errors.. But overall I think it was as good as the last time.. Specially the ending bit.. That ...

So as you wanted me to review.. I'm right here.. Yeah there were errors.. But as I read it.. I didn't even see them!! It was so engrossing and you've ...

hi.. Well as you must have read reviewers before me have already pointed most of the errors I noticed.. So I'll go on with the positive.. It was short, sweet, ...

hi.. so I found the way you've described the emotions and everything pretty good and engaging.. at first I found it a bit weird but as I read on My ...

Well I like this just as much as I liked the previous parts.. or more.. Or Much much more!! This is way better than one could have expected from the ...

hi there.. Well I just love your novel.. well what you've written of it till now at least.. It's so good!! Can't wait to read more!! Your choice of words ...

Hello.. Awwie!! This is so sweet!! Nate will be so happy to know such a lovely poem has been written for him!! I think you've done a fabulous work!! Love ...

hi.. So all in all I really liked your poem. Nut I too will say that you should rearrange the stanzas.. Also What you've done with the rhyme is very ...

oh boy!! This was so good!! I literally loved it!! And.. oh I just don't know what to say.. Speechless.. There's nothing wrong with it, That I can point out.. ...

hi.. I really liked your piece.. It was very well written. The only thing i didn't like was the repetition.. it was a good line but i personally didn't find ...