happyslappy13

I can completely understand your confusion, and there are absolutely no signs of planning. However, I did plan out this entire series over the course of a few years, and ...

My other three works for this series might help your understanding.

Hey, thanks! My goal for the series is to kind of mix the two genres of sci-fi and fantasy, saying that there are fantasy elements all around the universe. One ...

Thanks so much! This has been a great help in developing the prologue, and I appreciate the time you put into this review. :D Tenses are one of my weakest ...

I think people are missing the point that this was a true story, not one you made up to be scary.

Hahahaha srry 'bout that!

Thanks so so much! After that review, I really want to post both books at once, but that probably would spoil everything.

Thank you! It was a great and constructive review. However, it was the prologue for the second book in the series, and i am currently posting the first book chapter ...

Of coarse, how it ties into the war and all is revealed much later... and some ideas would be pretty cool. The second chapter is coming soon, and I expect ...

Then again, I may just revise this one. I'll see which fits better, because the whole reason that this scene was the prologue was because it takes place about a ...

Hey! Thanks for the really constructive review; I knew it was far from perfect. In fact, you gave me the idea to make this chapter one and have something more ...

Yeah, this one was supposed to be significantly shorter than the other chapters, but I agree some expansion could be provided.

Thanks. The prologue is certainly much better though...

Hey ladcat. (You'll never guess who I am). Reading this a second time was just as great as the first! I love how the little girl, Patricia, talks. Some of ...

Yes, I would have to agree that the constant second person is slightly distracting, but overall this lured me in. It is poetic in a way and has a fantastic ...