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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Edge of Insanity

    I like it! :) its very meaningful and dont worry when I write poetry I suck at rhyming too XD

    Tue Apr 26, 2011 9:12 pm
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A reconsidered notion

    Very good! :)

    Sun Apr 24, 2011 7:52 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: deleted

    Writers block is awful!! And its hard for people to understand it because their not writers or poets....the poem is great!! :)

    Sun Apr 24, 2011 7:23 pm
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Live

    I like it :) all of the words are true!

    Sun Apr 24, 2011 7:12 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dangerous Thoughts

    I loved it! You're a great poet :) Keep writing.

    Sun Apr 24, 2011 12:53 pm
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: The Splinterwood Letter

    You don't establish clearly what is occurring. You need explain in more detail who you are and what's going on. Thank you.

    Sun Apr 24, 2011 12:50 pm


If it looks like a duck, and it quacks like a duck…you should not be so quick to jump to conclusions.
— Cecil Gershwin Palmer