haina

I'm so sorry about the (very) late reply. This year had been completely crazy for me and I barely had a chance to go online. I'm so sorry! just figured ...

This poem was very much an experiment. My try at objective correlative. From the replies, I don't think it turned out as well as I would have liked. This poem ...

Thank you all for these lovely comments. I'm very glad that you all liked this poem.

I look through the rearview mirror She looks though the windshield Thats such a lovely thought. I like it.

As I was reading this, I got the most wonderful image of two people just sort looking at each other not saying anything. Like a scene from an old black ...

I like this. Clear and to the point.

I think you need some punctuation somewhere in there. All thats one sentence? Stick in a colon or semicolon. It will look and read a lot better. Otherwise, this is ...