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Well, my darlings, K'ratcha's back and he's been pestering me quite regularly these days, so I thought I'd write up some of the stuff he's dumped in my brain. Please ...

Chapter Four: ‘They came, the birds flighting the dark,[i] Not sure if this is a typo, but you have “flighting” here—if you meant “fighting” or “flying,” you may want to ...

:shock: *is a little shell-shocked* Ummm...hello then. Wow...I wrote this story a year ago for a class I aced, and while I'm really glad everyone's enjoyed it, it's not really ...

Lol, I'd forgotten this was here! Anyway, it is old and I'm no longer in need of any help on it (assignment's long gone, and if I do resurrect this ...

Um...you might want to put that version up at the top, darling. ;)

Danteel looked through the shuttle viewport as the mottled blues, greens, and whites of Locus Nova grew steadily closer and clearer. He glanced across the small cabin to Moncreif, who ...

...um, I realize bumping one's threads is bad form, but is no one going to take a look? I'd feel a total dork posting the next bit before this has ...

*changed to rated R Also, you might want to stick more spaces between your paragraphs, darling, right now they're rather difficult to distinguish/read.

*ahem* I'd just like to say-- this story's been officially published! Just in Truman State University's semi-annual literary publication, Windfall , but still, I'm published!

:smt090 :smt089 *sniffle* That's it ? Well, you'd better come out with another one soon! In the meantime... It was three days after I had left Baker Street. I had ...

Moved to Other Fiction.

Ender's Game rocks, but Ender's Shadow is just. totally. amazing. I *heart* Bean!

Lol, I'm sure he's made his mistakes in his time, darling.

F-word means instant R, darling; otherwise a good tale!

Here we go! thick, bumblebee rain drops lovely image I pretend to be perfect, like nothing happened, but here, inside my room, was the only place that I could break ...