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The Beginning Danteel fed the white rat a few crumbs from the remnants of his very bad dinner. The creature’s pink eyes seemed to glow in the darkness, and its ...

:oops: THANK YOU SO MUCH PHORCYS!!! (note: the reason I added that first paragraphy -should- become apparant later; the next "chapter" or whatever you like, doesn't follow this one chronologically, ...

Myth: thanks bucket loads! *gives box of cookies* I said I would integrate your LAST crit after the Finals mayhem was over, and *hits herself on head* I still haven't ...

Chapter 10 That night they stopped in a tiny clearing a hundred yards or so from the Academe. Karenna would have been worried about Gypsies or rescue parties from the ...

Really fantastic--I love the greed references. You made the landscape and the imagery come alive for me; a really fantastic bit of poetry.

:oops: I'm so glad you liked it, darling! And your catches are (as ever) imenseley helpful--they shall be integrated as soon as the Finals mayhem is over. One note: Shanna ...

Chapter 9 The whole next day Karenna watched Shana watch her. As the aristocrat’s eyes followed her, sneering behind the false smile. As her perfectly-shaped lips whispered vicious little tidbits ...

Mwahahahah....:-) You'll just have to wait to find out--wontcha? hehe....thanks for the catches--an especially good one with Jaan saying that Karenna hadn't entered the fight--he DID do that on purpos

Chapter 8 Fakir awoke at dawn. He stood, stretched and looked around him at the thirteen or so still-sleeping forms. He kicked one of them. “Get up, Dosh.” Dosh got ...

:oops: Thanks a lot, Shadow!!! :oops: note: Tannar did hear about the class 1,2,3 thing from Avarn, or rather read it--later I talk a little about the rather massive library ...

Thanks very much, Shadow! You bring up some really good points, it's always great to have another set of eyes look over my earlier parts. As to my viewpoint changes--frankly ...

Yay!!!! Thank you so much aero--your catches were fantastic, thanks so much! I have integrated them into the master copy, they shall soon be here for all to enjoy. Oh, ...

Aero--hey, what's up? haven't talked to you in a while--thought I'd pop by. And what is this I find? NO MORE VEIL! *dies* Darling, you are going to be the ...

beautiful, it sent shivers down my spine, darling.

Thanks so much to everyone who's posted here--this is the first bit of nonfiction I've posted! *blush* I'm glad you guys liked it. RR, it's basically just a description of ...