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  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: The Grim Sleeper (Prologue)

    Hello, thanks for reviewing! A lot of people have been praising how I ended this part so thanks for that! Chapter one is being worked on, and it should be ...

    Thu Jun 29, 2017 1:10 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: The Grim Sleeper (Prologue)

    Hi! Sorry for replying late, I've been on vacation. I have been rusty on my writing skills and this was helpful. Thank you for reviewing!

    Thu Jun 29, 2017 1:08 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: The Grim Sleeper (Prologue)

    Hi! Sorry for replying late, I've been on vacation. But don't really worry if you offended me, I'm a bit rusty in writing and this was helpful. Thank you for ...

    Thu Jun 29, 2017 1:06 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: The Grim Sleeper (Prologue)

    Thanks for the review!

    Fri Jun 23, 2017 2:49 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: The Grim Sleeper (Prologue)

    Thanks for the review!

    Fri Jun 23, 2017 2:48 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Becoming Human

    Oh, it's free verse? Wow that's embarrassing! But anyways it was an honor to review this and I'll keep my eye on you and your works!

    Tue Jun 20, 2017 2:20 am
  • Article / Essay » Romantic, Narrative Re: What I'm looking for in a girl

    "She's honest. She's smoothed out her broken shards and turned them into mosaics. She applies lotion to her own scars." I honestly can relate to this so much, because I ...

    Tue Jun 20, 2017 2:07 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Diseased (Ch. 1)

    Thanks for the review! I took a long break from writing and I'm still a bit rusty, so I'm not fully comfortable, but I do plan on going in depth ...

    Fri Jun 16, 2017 10:54 pm
  • Script » Humor, General Re: Everyone Act Natural!

    I found this very hilarious. I like how the brothers and sisters tried to ruin their older brother's relationship (which I believe that's happening). I really liked the ending the ...

    Mon Jun 12, 2017 7:53 pm


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