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Hello, hello. Gxldencrxwns here for a review. I really like this writing. You have an overall idea and a good plot and I like it. The sentences are descriptive and ...

I'm so very grateful and happy that other understand the body issues going on today. The rhyming was smooth and had something of a song feel to it. Good job ...

Hello, hello. Gxldencrxwns here for a review. I found this story to be quite relatable. I can relate to Keva's awkward personality and her 'me too' response to the cake ...

I really felt a bit comforted when I read this, I won't lie. Reading this made me tear up a tiny bit because it hits really close to home for ...

To be honest, I really can't find really anything wrong with this, spelling wise, except for one thing. In the first stanza, muzzled, should be muffled, but i don't think ...

I'm actually very speechless after I read this. This was... amazing! It's been a while since I've found a story that has detail and care put into it! I'm in ...

I don't have much to give criticism on because of the chapter length , but everything counts, right? I don't have much problem with this. Though since this is the ...

Overall, the writing is amazing. Your use of words help the reader get a full picture of what is going on in the poem. But, some of the rhymes don't ...