Young Writers Society

Hey! :smt001 “Forget safety, let’s just take the sonic-train to school!” Kevin mutters. He pulls his shoulder strap up higher and shifts his weight impatiently. The huge dome ceiling, complete ...

Gah! I click on this, and first thing I see is a hot dude! I'm like, "Oh hi!" Haha, anyway.... This looks like it has a whole lot of potential. ...

Aww, I thought this was good. Very few mistakes ( This is a random little story I thought of! :D I couldn't think of a good beggining so if you ...

Hey! I'm Lise. :] “Okay.” I finally answered, hoping that I picked the right choice. I didn’t bother looking at him, I was afraid of his reaction. He jumped off ...

Hello! :) I see you're new [so am I, but I already feel at home] and I'm Lise! :] This piece was very interesting, and the dream pulls you in ...

Aww, I found this good, yet sad. I shall do what other people do on here, and go over grammer errors, and then give my general impression. :] "Je’t’aime," she ...

Hello! I'm Lise, and I really liked this. It was very sad, especially for me, because my little brother is autistic, and he's teased a lot, and it kills me ...

Hey there! I'm Lise! I really enjoyed this! :] I love those dreams that you can remember and just picture. Haha. Like Truth said, it wasn't very awkward. Many people ...