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Re: It was too late...
Hi! I really like the idea of this story but, it sounded like it would be the closing paragraphs of a story. Also, I think there needs to be a ...
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: Almost
I like the idea of this story. I think there needs to be a little more about the main characters. Is the guy's name Remington or Alec? I think maybe ...
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: If we only had more time...
I really liked the idea of this story!! Between the 3rd and 4th paragraph, I think there should be more about the character's developing relationship. In the 3rd paragraph, it's ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: I Hate Him.
I liked the concept of this story. But, we don't know why Jess hates Kyle so much. The main characters also go back and forth from hate to love. I ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: Winter Bloom [edited yet again]
I really liked this story!! I think maybe you should say more about the narrator. You were really descriptive with the main character but, there's nothing about the narrator. Maybe ...
Dec 20, 2010