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Re: something i wrote bored in History class...
This is very interesting. It keeps me wanting to come back for more. And I just wonder what you mean by saying that she went back to the heavens. Was ...
Sep 4, 2023 -
Re: Time & Space (Part 1)
This story is awesome. It has such a Marvel vibe. Like the epic backstory of twin superheroes fighting time by freezing or slowing it. Or maybe Encanto. It feels like ...
Sep 3, 2023 -
Re: There’s more: Five short stories-Clowns, magic, murder, and lies
I only read number three- and I've feel like I know this character. I can already see this as the epilogue for a book. A rebellious teen, trying to find ...
Sep 3, 2023 -
Re: Night Time
This is beautiful- I really wish it was a chapter to an entire book. I feel like I can already sense the personality of this character. Somber and serious. I ...
Sep 3, 2023 -
Re: The Main Character Syndrome of Aynnhailleah Angel Astrid: Episode 1.1
Before I begin- this story is awesome. I just love the ending that wrapped back around to her first meeting him. I was only going to skim this- but it's ...
Sep 3, 2023