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Re: Abandoned
I have some poetry on this site. Check it out and tell me what you think.
Dec 8, 2015 -
Re: Abandoned
Like I said, fiction is not my strong point. I especially suck at dialogue. The way this assignment was presented, I got the impression that a characters thoughts can be ...
Dec 8, 2015 -
Re: Abandoned
Sometimes, you just don't question what an instructor says.
Dec 7, 2015 -
Re: Separation
Thanks for your thoughts.
Dec 5, 2015 -
Re: Separation
Whoa!! That never even crossed my mind. That's part of the beauty of poetry though-- each work has a different meaning to each individual.
Dec 5, 2015 -
Re: Up close
I enjoyed the simplicity and repetition in the piece. I agree with Chocolate Cello as far as "the night engulfs the day". I think it really helps the flow of ...
Dec 4, 2015 -
Re: Separation
One of my best friends is moving out of state. So, that's the thought behind that there. Thanks for the suggestion!!
Dec 4, 2015 -
Re: Dada Loves Me
This work has a very heart wrenching topic. Great job presenting it! I especially love how it's written from a young child's viewpoint!! Punctuation and spelling needs a little help-- ...
Dec 3, 2015
