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groganbabygirl

  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Abandoned

    I have some poetry on this site. Check it out and tell me what you think.

    Dec 8, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Abandoned

    Like I said, fiction is not my strong point. I especially suck at dialogue. The way this assignment was presented, I got the impression that a characters thoughts can be ...

    Dec 8, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Abandoned

    Sometimes, you just don't question what an instructor says.

    Dec 7, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Separation

    Thanks for your thoughts.

    Dec 5, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Separation

    Whoa!! That never even crossed my mind. That's part of the beauty of poetry though-- each work has a different meaning to each individual.

    Dec 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Up close

    I enjoyed the simplicity and repetition in the piece. I agree with Chocolate Cello as far as "the night engulfs the day". I think it really helps the flow of ...

    Dec 4, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Separation

    One of my best friends is moving out of state. So, that's the thought behind that there. Thanks for the suggestion!!

    Dec 4, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dada Loves Me

    This work has a very heart wrenching topic. Great job presenting it! I especially love how it's written from a young child's viewpoint!! Punctuation and spelling needs a little help-- ...

    Dec 3, 2015


Poetry is the art of creating imaginary gardens with real toads.
— Marianne Moore