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Re: If I Must Die
As other people have stated it's a wonderful poem, and I find no grammatical errors to nit pick about. Beautiful poem with beautiful words.
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: I Live On The Shore.
I feel that I was able to grasp the emotion in this poem, but on the other hand I had to give it a bit of thought. Overall it was ...
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Re: Dark Sister
The dark imagery was intriguing and i was genuinely impressed. Nice work..
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: my bestfriend
I think this could have been short and sweet, or a few more metaphors thrown in to bring it to life, but nice work.. 6/10
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: Lost
It's not bad, I wish it could have been a little longer with a stronger emphasis towards detail, but the imagery was simple,but due to a lack of detail the ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: Boulevard of Broken Dreams
I enjoyed this, despite the fact your title of choice share's a name with a song I don't personally like. But that's irrelevant keep up the goodwork!!
Dec 5, 2010