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Re: The War Between Ice & Fire: Chapters 1-2
Glad you liked it! Thanks for the corrections! :D
Jun 17, 2015 -
Re: Parallel Needs: Chapter One: Part One
Just realized I slipped into present in that rewrite example... told you they were sneaky. Lol :D
Jun 16, 2015 -
Re: A Tribute to Charlie.
Hello! :D You have a great way with description - I really like your style! It keeps things fresh, interesting, and unique. With a couple little nitpicks out of the ...
May 30, 2015 -
Re: The City - Part 2
Thanks a ton! I'm glad you liked it! I know, I realize it's more than a little bit of a filler chapter... which is awful, so I might just combine ...
May 6, 2015 -
Re: The City - Part 2
Thank you for the review! As for the dad... I didn't intend for it to be the first time he had met the boyfriend. Suppose I forgot to make that ...
May 2, 2015 -
Re: Persistence will be Heard
Um, that was weird... sorry! I have no idea why it just posted that twice. :/
Apr 30, 2015 - Re: Persistence will be Heard Apr 30, 2015
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Re: Walking Survival - One
Hey! :D Just wanted to say good job... I know how hard it is to write a first chapter and you did a good job of it! While I was ...
Apr 16, 2015 -
Re: The City - Part 1
Ohhh... gotcha :D
Apr 15, 2015 -
Re: This is our song
Awesome! And you're totally welcome!!!! :D
Apr 14, 2015 -
Re: The City - Part 1
Thanks, Smoky the Bear. That was a great, necessary piece of advice. Lol.
Apr 13, 2015 -
Re: The City - Part 1
Thank you so much! I don't mind your little nitpicks at all - they're pretty helpful! Those tenses are always slipping up with me, so thank you for pointing them ...
Apr 6, 2015 -
Re: The City - Part 1
Thaaank you! I really appreciate it! I'm glad you like the characters; trying to add more depth in the next parts. Thanks again! :) :)
Apr 6, 2015