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Re: Nightmare- Take 1
I like how the title makes sense when paired with the poem. However I am not so much of a fan with the repetition style. Firstly it seems like your ...
Aug 3, 2011 -
Re: Rain Is Coming But the Rainbow Is Already Here
This was a very good poem and I loved the format because it gave more of a picture than it would of if it was just plain. It was an ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: Loose Change
I kind of agree with tgirl because the last line was a bit of a downer for me too. One of the main things for me though is the fact ...
Jul 26, 2011 -
Re: Your Pride
This is an okay poem to me with a true meaning behind it. I can't even tell you how much I actually relate to this but the ending is a ...
Jul 26, 2011 -
Re: Untitled
I don't really get what this poem is supposed to be about so its hard to critisise* it. I you gave an insight or something on what it was supposed ...
Jul 26, 2011
