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goodolnoah

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: ♦ Plague of the Desert - Part 2 ♦

    Thank you for the comments and feedback! I am happy you noticed I tried to make their family seem more supportive (in contrast to most Queer stories,lol). I do agree ...

    Jun 5, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: ♦ Plague of the Desert - Part 2 ♦

    Aww, thank you for the great review! I am happy you picked up on the relationships between Fi and their parents. I actually did not realize I made her mother ...

    Jun 5, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: ♦ Plague of the Desert - Part 1 ♦

    (pssst, also, if you are interested in reading further, I will be posting a new chapter every Friday and Tuesday)

    Jun 3, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: ♦ Plague of the Desert - Part 1 ♦

    (pssst, also, if you are interested in reading further, I will be posting a new chapter every Friday and Tuesday)

    Jun 3, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: ♦ Plague of the Desert - Part 1 ♦

    Thank you for the review! I really appreciate the wording/grammar choices you gave me! I%u2019ve been working on trying to have other senses involved in my current WiP, as it%u2019s ...

    Jun 3, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: ♦ Plague of the Desert - Part 1 ♦

    Oh wow! Thank you for the kind words and comments! I'm happy I was able to get you hooked! Fi is certainly in for a ride...

    Jun 3, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter Four: Portal 1.1

    Ahhh, ive seen the Loki series! If I were to translate Kang's voice into words I could see it as being more drug out, lol.

    Jun 2, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Project.Xyria-Prolouge!

    It is okay if you feel like you have lost interest! Something that helps me when I lose interest is to re-read my story (or at least parts of it) ...

    Jun 2, 2024
  • Short Story » Narrative, Science Fiction Re: You Are (Not) Wonderful

    AAAA I am happy you noticed much of the symbolism I tried to pack into the story! Thank you for this review, I wanted to try some new things with ...

    May 31, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Chapter Three: Chaos 1.3

    Hello there! I am a bit confused about this chapter, since in it's current state, it seems like a copy of the previous chapter. Perhaps an error when you put ...

    May 30, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Daughter of War - Chapter 35: Together

    Aww thank you for the kind words, I certainly understand life getting in the way, I truly hope everything surrounding Harley/college/etc is alright

    May 30, 2024
  • Short Story » Narrative, Science Fiction Re: You Are (Not) Wonderful

    Thank you for the great review! I am happy you thought my descriptions came out well. I do see what you mean with emotions shifting a bit fast. I have ...

    May 25, 2024
  • Short Story » Narrative, Science Fiction Re: You Are (Not) Wonderful

    Thank you for the kind words! I tend to want to make sure my stories are both descriptive and to the point! So I am happy that every sentence seemed ...

    May 25, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Shattered Gravity - Part 5 「𖤓」

    Thank you for the review! I would certainly consider this the turning point in the story. I am happy that you like Panda as much as I do! Hes one ...

    May 13, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Shattered Gravity - FINALE「𖤓」

    The finale! Thank you for reading this far, it is so very much appreciated! :D

    May 11, 2024


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