goodolnoah

Aww thank you for the wonderful comment! I appreciate the grammar and fluency comments. I am slowly working on improving my grammar so everything I write about is succinct and ...

I will say that this is more or less the end of the "2nd act" of the story. Henceforth, everyone in Joji has passed, as well as Xo-Shi.,. I realized ...

Awww, thank you for the comments about my writing voice! I strive to make my writing simple to read, but with layers to read in between the lines. I appreciate ...

Thank you for your reviews today! I am glad you enjoyed Kitty's insertion into this story as a side character! I assume you have an idea of where we are ...

Thank you for the review! I guess you could consider this a bit of a turning point in the story%u2026

Thank you for the review! I think this chapter is a bit rough, now that I am looking at it again with fresh eyes. One writing habit I am trying ...

Yes%u2026It is what you think it is (%u3160%u2038%u3160) (I also loved the little insert you made about my dirty tactic to draw audiences into Asta only to take her away ...

I find it pretty funny that you make the Panda comparison with Raiya. She%u2019s originally from a story I wrote in 2021 where the events with her father transpire. The ...

Aww thank you for the review! :mrgreen: Your reviews truly never get old, it makes me very happy that you are interested in my little stories! I am astonished to ...

I was a little worried things would get info-dumpy in some chapters of this story%u2026I think some pieces would%u2019ve been better-suited in other places. Anywho, now for the shameless plug! ...

Aww, thank you for the review, Raven! I am glad you are sticking with my stories thus far :mrgreen:

AAAAA thank you for the praise! I cannot express how happy it makes me that many of the impactful moments I included seemed to make an impact. I have some ...

Thank you for the review! Overall, I personally have mixed feelings about this chapter and these characters. (mainly trouble surrounding where to place it, since it could cause pacing issues.) ...

Thank you for the wonderful review! DRU is a recurring figure in most of my stories, so I am happy their inclusion made sense for the most part, lol. Since ...

Thank you for the in-depth review! People like you really motivate me to keep my writing dynamic! I%u2019m happy the twists and turns I decided this story to take landed ...