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Hi Winny! Here to check out another glorious chapter of this story! This is a bit of a shorter chapter, but there are a lot of important character moments! 𔓘 ...

Hi Winny, here to check out another chapter of Paraxia. I have a lot of good things to say about this one! First, here’s a little recommendation… ⟡ Recommendations ⟡ ...

Hi! I'm here to leave a little review on this excellent poem/philosophical rambling!!! Reading this, I am unsure if this would qualify is a poem by definition? It doesn't really ...

⟡ Recommendations ⟡ Quick note: My recommendations are things that I suggest as they come to me. I would assume that you are trying to publish/improve as a writer, and ...

Hi Winny! I have returned to check out the beginning of chapter 3! ⟡ Recommendations ⟡ Back to the idea of learning more about Rue’s backstory. I get this is ...

Hey! This looks like a continuation of the second chapter. Let’s see what lies ahead… 𔓘 Writing Commentary 𔓘 “are the men and women appointed by the kingdom to oversee ...

Hey! I am back to check out the next part of this story! ⟡ Recommendations/Criticism ⟡ I see many of these other reviewers haven’t really read the first chapter, so ...

Hey Vamp! I know I’m not a regular reviewer of this story, but this seemed standalone enough that I could check it out! Let’s see what this backstory holds… 𔓘 ...

This is a cool little poem! I guess it could be a narrative sort of about taking ownership of your "bruises" whether they be physical or mental. The prose and ...

Hey! Ages ago you asked me to check out this story in my review thread. I would still like to honor this ask, so I’ll be chipping my way through ...

I believe this concludes Josephine’s story. Here I will give my final thoughts and maybe a little bit of character reviews! ⟡ Recommendations/Criticism ⟡ Josephine didn’t know how to feel. ...

Hey Ley! I have returned to check out the next chapter in DoW! Let’s see what we have in store! I sorta changed the order in my reviewing sections here, ...

Hey there and welcome to YWS! Quite the thought-provoking story you have here, so here’s some of my thoughts! 𔓘 Writing Commentary 𔓘 i am me, therefore I am. This ...

Hi! I see you are a bit of a newer member of YWS, so if I haven’t said it already, welcome! I saw this little story and as I began ...

Hey buddy! Long time no see! I saw the excellent art for this piece and I figured I should give it a read! The title, Parrot & Raven. It gives ...