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The Daughter of War - Chapter 41: The Light Between Us

by Leya

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Chapter 41: The Light Between Us

Warmth.

It was the first thing Josephine felt, a golden heat pressing against her skin, sinking into her bones. For a long moment, she let herself exist in it, afraid that if she moved, if she opened her eyes, it would all disappear, and she’d find herself back in the suffocating darkness with Hades.

The world around her was different. The air smelled of something sweet—jasmine?—and when she shifted slightly, her fingers brushed against silk, soft and cool beneath her touch. A bed.

I’m in a bed.

Her chest rose and fell in a steady rhythm. No sulfur. No souls trying pulling her under. Just the sound of a gentle breeze from two open windows.

Josephine opened her eyes.

Blinding white light flooded her vision, and she winced, lifting a hand to shield herself. As her sight adjusted, the room came into focus—tall marble pillars stretched toward a ceiling painted with pink and gold constellations. Golden sunlight spilled in from the open balcony, carrying the scent of blooming flowers.

Home

She exhaled shakily. They had won. They had escaped.

A rustle of movement drew her attention. Jase sat in a chair beside the bed, his posture slouched in a way she had never seen before. His usually sharp features were full of exhaustion with dark circles beneath his eyes. He was just Jase, and something about that made her heart hurt.

He sat there, half-asleep, with his head rested against the back of the chair, arms crossed loosely, one foot tapping absently against the floor. Slowly, Josephine reached out, fingers brushing his wrist. At the touch, Jase stirred, inhaling sharply as his eyes snapped open.

For a second, he just stared at her, as if he couldn’t quite believe what he was seeing. Then, before she could say anything, he leaned forward, his hand wrapping around hers, gripping it tightly.

Josie,” he breathed.

Something in her melted at the sound of her name on his lips. She had so many questions, but none of them mattered right now.

She licked her lips, her throat dry, “We made it?”

Jase let out a breath, smiling faintly, “Yeah,” he murmured, “You did it. We did it.”

Josephine smiled as wide as she could. Jase opened his mouth to speak again before the door creaked open, revealing the second most important person that Josephine needed to see—Persephone. “You’re awake.”

Her voice was breathless, almost frantic. Then, in a blur of dark curls and green silk, Persephone was at her bedside, gripping Josephine’s other hand.

“You scared the hell out of me,” Persephone choked, eyes watering, “I thought—” She cut herself off, squeezing Josephine’s hand tighter.

Josephine leaned her head back onto her pillow, “I’m fine,” she gripped Persephone’s hand back.

Persephone let out something between a laugh and a sob, “Barely,” she pulled her hand back, running a hand through her wild curls, pacing the length of the room, “Gods, Josephine, I wanted to come. I tried. But he—Zeus—he wouldn’t let me. The second Hades took you, I fought to go after you, but they stopped me. They said it was out of my hands. That it had to be you,” she shook her head, “I should have fought harder. I should have—”

“Persephone—” Josephine reached out, catching her wrist, “You couldn’t have. I understand.”

Persephone’s expression softened while she nodded, “I just—I couldn’t lose you.”

Jase sighed, “She didn’t need you to save her,” he sat up in his chair, stretching slightly before looking at Josephine with a tired grin, “She saved herself.”

Persephone rolled her eyes, smirking, “Oh, for once you’re not an asshole.”

Jase smirked. “There’ve been plenty of times where I’m not an asshole. You just never listen.”

Josephine blinked between them. Usually, they could barely be in the same room without gnawing at each other. But something was different. There was still tension, but there was less hostility, more understanding.

Persephone huffed but didn’t argue, “You got her out.”

Jase looked at Persephone, nodding, “I wasn’t leaving without her.”

Josephine gripped Jase’s hand tighter. If she could hold onto it forever, she would.

Persephone sighed dramatically, but her lips curved in a small smile, “Guess I have to start tolerating you now.”

“Guess so,” Jase yawned, “Josephine, do you have enough energy to stand? I think there’s someone else you’d like to see.”

Josephine perked up slightly, “My mother?”

Silence filled the room. Neither Persephone or Jase spoke.

Josephine’s looked at them, her relief now replaced by anger, “Tell me.”

Persephone bit her lip, glancing at Jase before finally sighing, “Aphrodite is… alive.”

The world tilted.

Josephine looked to her lap, her hand anxiously playing with the blanket over her, “No. That’s not possible. I saw her,” Josephine shook her head, voice lowering to a whisper while she shook her head, “I saw her die.”

“You saw what Hades wanted you to see,” Jase said, “He knew it would break you. Knew it would make you reckless. So, he made you believe she was gone. He had her imprisoned, as leverage.”

Josephine didn’t know how to feel. She’d spent the last few days thinking her mother was dead. She remembered Hera’s words: Gods don’t die. In this case, Hera was correct. But her mother got lucky.

“I don’t understand. How…?” Her words faltered.

“You’ve been through enough,” Persephone said, “I’ll explain everything later. But right now, your mother’s waiting for you. She’s alive. Come with me. She’s been waiting for you. She’s been... worried.”

Josephine’s chest tightened. She didn’t hesitate to stand.

Josephine’s legs felt weak, but Jase was right there, steadying her as she rose. The world seemed to spin for a moment, and she clenched her fists to ground herself. Jase kept his hand at her back, guiding her through his chambers, the walls lined with blue accents and portraits, some of whom Josephine didn’t recognize. Everything felt dreamlike.

Persephone led the way, her pace quickening as they moved toward the entrance. The palace was silent, almost unnervingly so. Jase’s words repeated in her mind, over and over again. You saw what Hades wanted you to see. But Josephine couldn't bring herself to trust it, not fully, not yet. It felt too much like a dream, a cruel illusion.

The door before them creaked open, and Josephine stepped inside. The room before her was bathed in soft golden light, and there, standing by a large marble column, was her mother. Aphrodite’s golden hair shimmered, and her eyes—the one’s she gave to Josephine—met Josephine’s with a slight twinkle.

Aphrodite’s smile softened with a gentle curve of her lips. She stepped forward, her arms open, and without a word, Josephine collapsed into her mother’s arms.

For a moment, they just stood there. Josephine clung to her, breathing in her scent. She didn’t know how long they stood like that, but when Aphrodite finally pulled away, they both took a deep breath.

“You did it, Josephine,” her mother cooed, “look at you. You remind me so much of your father.”

“Doesn’t she?” Jase scoffed in the background, “I almost couldn’t tell them apart,” he joked.

Josephine smiled and glanced at Persephone and Jase, “I never thought I’d hear that. That I resemble my father.”

“Look at all you’ve done,” Aphrodite moved to the windowsill, gracefully sitting down on the pale wooden bench. She patted the area next to her, “Come sit, darling.”

Josephine moved to sit next to Aphrodite but was interrupted by a set of heavy footsteps approaching from the connected hallway. A shadow fell across the doorway, and Josephine looked up, not surprised at who she saw.

Ares, her father, stood in the frame. He moved and took the spot next to Aphrodite instead, his armor clinking with every step. He almost refused to make eye contact with Josephine. She didn’t forget the favor he granted her; the fact he defended her in the first battle against Hades.

Neither of them spoke for a long few seconds. Aphrodite tilted her head slightly toward him. She gave him a glance that was equal parts longing and patience. Josephine had longed for Ares to see her—really see her. To hear the approval in his voice, the reassurance that she hadn’t been just a child of circumstance, of politics, of an affair between gods. That was the whole reason she got into godly affairs in the first place—the Trials. Even though she didn’t win, she still felt like she proved she was a force to be reckoned with. She just hoped that her father felt the same way.

Finally, it was Aphrodite who broke the quiet, "Ares," she began, "I think it’s time."

Ares’ jaw tightened slightly, a muscle ticking at his temple. But he didn’t argue. Instead, he sighed deeply. He turned slightly toward Josephine, though his gaze never fully met hers. There was a flicker of what looked like regret in his eyes, but it disappeared before Josephine could even truly register it.

“You’ve done well, Josephine,” he said, “You have defied all odds. Not only have you proven to the council that you’re more than capable of your own, but I’ve also underestimated you. I’m… sorry…” his voice trailed off, as if he was unsure whether those words were enough.

Josephine blinked. He had acknowledged her. After everything, after the years of waiting for a moment like this, it was finally here. Ares continued, “Don’t mistake me, you remind me of myself. Of what I was, before everything. I’m proud of you, Josephine. More than you know. I... haven’t been the father you deserved. But I’ve never stopped seeing you. Never stopped wondering if you were capable of greatness. You are, Josephine. You always were.”

“Thank you,” she whispered, her voice barely audible. She wasn’t sure who she was thanking, but it didn’t matter. For the first time, Josephine didn’t feel like she was waiting for something to change. It had changed. She had changed.

“You’ve earned it,” Ares said, his voice now quieter, the edge of his earlier coldness fading away. “And in time, you’ll earn more.”

Finally, Ares extended his hand to hers, grasping it firmly.

Josephine glanced at Persephone and Jase, who were hovering in the doorway awkwardly. Persephone waved discretely before disappearing behind the wall. Jase stayed for a few more moments, just staring at her with a look of approval. Not long after, he nodded his head once and left Josephine with her parents.

And as she had her first real conversation with her parents as equals, she realized she was no longer just a pawn in a game of gods. She was the daughter of war—the one who had overcome the darkness, the one who had burned through the trials to become something stronger.

Josephine knew this wasn’t the end for her. No gods, no fate, could change that.

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I believe this concludes Josephine’s story. Here I will give my final thoughts and maybe a little bit of character reviews!

⟡ Recommendations/Criticism ⟡

Josephine didn’t know how to feel. She’d spent the last few days thinking her mother was dead. She remembered Hera’s words: Gods don’t die. In this case, Hera was correct. But her mother got lucky.


This is more of a crit/nitpick from yours truly. I am totally fine with Aphrodite coming back, but it feels like a little bit of a retcon that she is back now. We sort of skip the journey of Josephine trying to find her mother like Hera had referred to. I think the ending is just fine, but to see her just magically back sort of undermines the “death” we saw earlier.

I guess an alternate ending I would imagine is having Josephine go off to find her mother. You could still have Ares reconcile with her. Maybe he could even join the adventure. I’m not saying we would need more chapters showing this, I think it would be cool to end it a little more open-ended. It would also show that there is more to come for Josephine, instead of her just thinking “this isn’t the end for me”.

I’m just thinking out loud here, though! I think the ending here is perfectly fine, as you’ll see down below!

𔓘 Writing Commentary 𔓘

Here I’ll leave my thoughts about this chapter itself! In my story commentary section, It’ll be commentary on the STORY as a whole.

tall marble pillars stretched toward a ceiling painted with pink and gold constellations. Golden sunlight spilled in from the open balcony, carrying the scent of blooming flowers.


Light is spilling in. Silly enough, light conquers the dark here, and it’s reflected sooo well in these descriptions!

The door before them creaked open, and Josephine stepped inside. The room before her was bathed in soft golden light, and there, standing by a large marble column, was her mother. Aphrodite’s golden hair shimmered, and her eyes—the one’s she gave to Josephine—met Josephine’s with a slight twinkle.


I feel like it is particularly evident in this chapter. You are adding little moments of movement to characters. Her hair shimmering, her eyes meeting Josephine with a twinkle. It’s like now that Josephine’s free she is now seeing everything more clearly. Picking up on more expressions now that the stress is gone…

Josephine had longed for Ares to see her—really see her. To hear the approval in his voice, the reassurance that she hadn’t been just a child of circumstance, of politics, of an affair between gods. That was the whole reason she got into godly affairs in the first place—the Trials. Even though she didn’t win, she still felt like she proved she was a force to be reckoned with. She just hoped that her father felt the same way.


I love this little segment of thoughts from Josephine. This reminds me of some of the first times we saw/heard of Ares towards the beginning of the story. It’s almost a full circle moment. Josephine feeling a little more respected from Ares and receiving the love that she has craved for such a long time. Of course, in the following speech from Ares we see that he admits his flaws!

It’s funny. I think Ares has one of the best arcs of the actual 12 Olympians themselves! I like hate the actual mythical Ares, so seeing him here is such a nice change of pace!

Josephine knew this wasn’t the end for her. No gods, no fate, could change that.


I think this line makes it clear that there is more to her story, whether unseen or seen. I know she becomes an Olympian based on your moon story.

In terms of a happy ending, we pretty much see Josephine get what she wanted as a character. Approval from both of her parents. Even furthermore, we see genuine connection between Ares and Aphrodite too! For this story, I think it's a pretty great note to end on!

I figured I would have more crit based on the ending. That’s what most endings do, after all. But I can’t see a way this story can be extended beyond where it stops here. Josephine gets her happy ending, and it’s really nice and heartwarming to see here!

ꨄ︎ Story Commentary ꨄ︎

Amazing job! I personally loved reading through this tale (and I liked it more than the likes of Percy Jackson, lol).

I will drop my critiques about the story and the dangers I feel like you come close to sometimes right here, before the good stuff.

I feel like you avoid it by having Josephine have help throughout the story, but there were times I felt like her powers were a little overpowered? It’s this hellfire that can basically beat anyone and anything, including Olympians with thousands of years of experience. If you go further with edits or ever try to be published, I would make sure you check yourself to make sure she never seems too overpowered.

I wish we got a little more explanation behind where her powers come from. They are of the underworld, but how? Where? Why do they come from the underworld? I figured there would maybe be a connection to someone like Typhon of Olympian myth. Just a hanging question I felt like wasn’t really answered fully.

Anyway, these are just my general critiques, and I feel like it would be disingenuous as a reviewer to leave you with ALL positive things. Overall, I still feel really strongly about this story!

Jase and Persephone are very strong characters to go along with Josephine, and I think she is a pretty well-rounded protagonist. Having Persephone and Jase not like each other is also a great detail you added! It adds to the drama of everything!

I personally love Persephone! I think she is great at highlighting Josephine’s flaws and also acts as an amazing supporter with her fiery personality. I feel the same for Jase, and he might be the better supporter between him and Persephone. Seeing his journey alongside Josie’s was excellent!

The supporting characters past these guys are also great! I loved people like Nyx, Harmonia, Hecate, etc. They all have their own personality and add flavor to the world and characters!

I think it is great that we see a collection of different Olympian-related environments besides just Olympus, and your descriptions don’t disappoint. It feels like a true adventure from the underworld, to the sea, to Olympus, and to lands far and wide!

❀ Closer ❀

Overall, I would consider this like a classic Olympian story in the modern-day with a fresh protagonist and memorable characters. I think it is fantastic.

I see you also continue the world building further with other stories and also the other story you are working on with Rhea (which might answer some of my underlying questions). I’m glad you continue to keep going. Stay healthy, have a good day, and keep on writing!

Omgggg you finished! Thank you so much for the critiques (they help soooo much o.o, seriously!) and I hope that you will follow along when I start posting the story about Rhea! :D

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Ravena wrote a review · Tue Apr 22, 2025 3:48 pm

Hello, My Friend!

Getting back into the review game, it’s me, Raven, and I’m here to review the next (final I assume?) chapter in this great story, using my Familiar method! I would like to apologize in advance for any dip in quality, as I am still stuck on mobile and my template is rather…finicky lol. Let’s dive right in, shall we?

What The Black Eyes See
~ A full analysis and breakdown


Oh my gosh, I’m so happy I was able to read this!! What an absolutely beautiful conclusion to such a long battle, and so many amazing character arcs! Seeing Josephine back home, reunited with literally everyone—Persephone, Jase, Ares, even Aphrodite (so glad she survived!!), makes for a very heartwarming and satisfying ending. Let's get into the details though.

Plot and Pacing: Perfect! It brings in every important character and wraps up all their stories…for now. It’s a nice length, shorter and focused on concluding things, yet nothing feels left out.

Descriptions and Setting: Beautiful! You staged everything so well, and the environment feels so warm and homey in stark contrast to Hades’s place. Great place to end the story on.

Characterization: Oh gosh, where to begin?? Josephine is finally able to catch a break, rest, and reunite with everyone most important to her, as she finally gains the respect and love she deserves from them—particularly Ares. Yet the way it ends, repeating the trials she’s faced so poetically, just reiterates that sense of power we know she has.

Persephone and Jase, they really make the perfect team with Josie—despite the little feud between the former two. Jase sticking by her side despite clearly being exhausted, Persephone wishing she could’ve helped despite the hell she’s faced…I mean, golden. Perfect. They clearly care for Josie as much as she’s clearly proven to care for them.

And finally, Aphrodite and Ares—I mean, Aphrodite is awesome as usual, and it was such a shocking yet satisfying moment, seeing Ares finally giving Josie respect and admitting to his error in underestimating her. I also thought it was adorable how it took Aphrodite telling him to say it, as it reminded me of what it took to return Ares to their side in the first place. It really feels like he still has a soft spot for her, which is nice.

Grammar and Wording: I didn’t catch any typos or the like! As a matter of fact, the way you worded how Josephine feels back home, the emotional language and gestures between the characters, and that banger of an ending…amazing. Nailed it!

Where The Dagger Points
~ Some nitpicks and little recommendations


I have nothing to put in this section! Great writing job!

Why The Grin Widened
~ My reactions, theories, and favorite parts


Well, I guess my theory section remains empty now! Though I am curious if Josephine will make an appearance in other books of this universe…

And now, reactions and special moments!

“Gods, Josephine, I wanted to come. I tried. But he—Zeus—he wouldn’t let me. The second Hades took you, I fought to go after you, but they stopped me. They said it was out of my hands. That it had to be you,” she shook her head, “I should have fought harder. I should have—”


I thought this moment from Persephone was so sweet! Like girl, after all you’ve been through, you have a MORE than decent excuse to sit this fight out. Yet it still took Zeus restraining her! It really shows how much she cares for her friend.

Persephone rolled her eyes, smirking, “Oh, for once you’re not an asshole.”

Jase smirked. “There’ve been plenty of times where I’m not an asshole. You just never listen.”


Of course. Had to have a moment like this XD

“Aphrodite is… alive.”


YAY!!! She DID come back!!!

“You’ve done well, Josephine,” he said, “You have defied all odds. Not only have you proven to the council that you’re more than capable of your own, but I’ve also underestimated you. I’m… sorry…”


About time he said it!! You can just sense how hard it is for him to admit it, but whether due pride or shame, that tone makes the delivery all the more impactful.

And as she had her first real conversation with her parents as equals, she realized she was no longer just a pawn in a game of gods. She was the daughter of war—the one who had overcome the darkness, the one who had burned through the trials to become something stronger.

Josephine knew this wasn’t the end for her. No gods, no fate, could change that.


I’ll say it again, absolute banger of an ending!! Revisiting everything that led her here, and shining a light on her future as the daughter of war!! So good!!

Our Mad Thoughts...


Overall, my god, that was incredible!!! Now I’m even more annoyed that I haven’t read this sooner lol—but anyway, this whole book has been just such amazing quality in terms of both writing and storytelling, this deserves to be a bestseller some day—it really does! And I can’t wait to see what awaits in Son Of Night

Amazing work, friend! Nicely done! :D

Thus concludes my review. To leave off, here are some inspiring quotes, courtesy of your resident Poe freak ~

"They who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night."
"Words have no power to impress the mind without the exquisite horror of their reality.”
"I would define, in brief, the poetry of words as the rhythmical creation of Beauty."

AHHHH! Thank you Raven!! Your reviews have really helped me push through to finishing this xD I appreciate you!!



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