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I shall review (not really critique) your Nightmares , before I go to sleep, myself. I’m tucked up in bed, so deliciously cosy. Nothing can hurt me. I love 'so ...

Now you've got me all reminiscing! I absolutely love the 'magic words' before every verse. It reminded me of the books my mom read to me when I was little. ...

Hm, what an interesting thing to write poems about. (I've seen movies, videos and TV shows, heard songs and stories, read books and articles about Las Vegas, but never encountered ...

I'm quoting my half-awake twelve-year-old sister to start off with: "Whoever wrote that should send that in!" ;) This is was so.. perfect (and yes, I tend to use this ...

I AGREE. Virginia Slim? Virginia slime. A good way to start out your poem. It doesn't begin to heavy, which might've turned people away. Coughing, hacking, heaving, your breath fills ...

Before I fully critique anything, I must tell you that there is nothing actually wrong with your story. It is your classic 'two girls, one guy' scenario, that many books ...