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Haha, I write a lot of horror if you need more cringe. I did write one more part but then it withered away. You know what? When I have the ...

Very good just watch the paragraphing and spelling

'He then grabbed one of the angle woman' Make sure you type angel and not angle XD

The character leans towards monsters which is why they are misunderstood.

No problem :D

Thank you so much. I agree that this is a growing problem

Thanks x

Thank you! :D

Oh yeah! The line about thought is referring to the full line beforehand XD

I have tried the Shakespearian language but it seems a bit forced, did what I could. Also I have altered the last line a little - it was meant to ...

Thank you for the review. Just a side note - I think that Satan shows justice since since he is punishing all those who have done evil in the world. ...

Haha thanks JKHatt! One thing, I'm British so my spelling is a little different (realise is the British spelling)

Dr carnival-you can find it on the story section in my portfolio x

Aww thanks for the awesome review! If you like this you might like my other horror story :D

Thank you so much :D