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Well, first I have to tell you that the whole idea of this is kind of wonderful. I like romanticism and this is a nice piece, but I think it's ...

Very imaginative. And very. . . I don't know. Maybe weird but in a good way. It's like giving an advise to a friend, very different from most poems I ...

Very pleasing piece, though I think it would be even greater if you develop it a little. Now, it seems like it doesn't have a rhyming scheme (it doesn't need ...

Hey! Guess you're an Adam fan :) I know this song was stuck in my head too the day I discovered it. You did an excellent job though, switching between ...

Cool story! It kept me entertained and involved. I also liked the fact that it was first-person-narrated. Karma seems an interesting character. The thing I like about this piece is ...

Hey, This was amazing. Though, it wasn't really a story. Maybe a fragment of one or of a novel. I'm sure you can fit this in wherever you need a ...

Again, a wonderful story. Not as intense as I'm Not A Monster After All but still loaded with a strong emotion. I felt so sorry for Amelia. . . I ...

Hey! Excellent piece. It was SO intense. I could feel the chill. Yikes. Creepy too. Frank is like the other side of Saul, right? I liked many things about this ...

Oh my God! I loved reading this so much. It's totally relevant; that's what most girls do today to look thin. I liked how Sally lost so much weight, but ...

Hello, fellow writer. I'm a new member too and hope you feel as fantastic as I do about this site. Okay, about the story, I'd be dishonest if I said ...

I like all the descriptive detail. It really made me imagine the person you were talking about. I also liked the similes, "Like a child". Good job, though I would ...