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  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: c h o i c e

    hey there so, this is a really brilliant story, I like the feel of emotions from both characters you should probably work on how changing of thoughts and emotions can ...

    Jan 25, 2017
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Science Fiction Re: A New Beginning

    hey this is a really good written piece, especially for a first chapter. It's quite promising. you brought out the life in college to a T. What I would really ...

    Jan 24, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: it felt good

    hey there @DivergentDemigod just popping in to say something small first of all, simple, good and easy to understand language used. it's really brief which isn't bad from your description ...

    Jan 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Seize or Be Seized

    It sparks sparks thoughts in a person as i think was intended when written. its under-detailed but that is the beauty of it. it couldn't use more words without ruining ...

    Jan 21, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Melt - 1.3 - Falling Girls

    Oh My God! I really love this chapter, why? Its got so much suspense (the good kind) so it makes you want to keep on reading. I really got hooked ...

    Jan 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Just a small poem

    hey, i really enjoy your poem. It has simple language which makes it easier to get the intended message. The message really showcases the state in which quite a few ...

    Jan 21, 2017


Vampires aren't real, but you know what is? And far more annoying? MOSQUITOS
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