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I love this novel so much, you can go very far with this my friend! :) The plot was amzing from the start and just keeps getting better! The picture ...

Wow, this poem was so good! :D I loved the last line, it really tied the whole poem to a conclusion! All her petals have tore I didn't get the ...

Hello again! :) Sorry I didn't realize the second chapter was out!! :p A few things I noticed. I never start a sentence with and or but. It is informal ...

Hi and welcome to YWS!! Remember if you do not review others works you will not get reviewed. Usually when writing a story you don't put it in a spoiler, ...

This story is so good, the plot is just amazing and your writing voice is so great! I didn't notice a whole lot of errors. A few places you forgot ...

Looks like I will be your reviewer!! :D I like your writing voice, though I found it confusing at first but I got used to it. Few little errors, they ...

Truthfully I didn't really like this piece, it was to dull for my taste. I think you should liven it up a bit, make it have more spunk! It all ...

I like! it was really interesting and I read it twice!

Wow, that is quite the story. Though it isn't all that short. I would have maybe put it into a short chapter book? Just giving you an idea. There are ...

Yay!! :D I have been waiting! Very good chapter. Nice job with the descriptions by the way! Few errors. Mistakes like always will be in red. As I lay in ...

Omg! I was waiting :D Very cute! I think you should tell us(the readers) what emily looks like, if Jake says she is an angel she must be pretty. She ...

EEEPP. I like! A little short, you could have put two and three together, but that's alright! I loved the ending! It was so...., great! -Errors. Like I said last ...

Yay! The second and third chapter are out! I've been waiting! This chapter is short =[ I think you should add some more detail about Jake's mind and how he ...

I like so far :D I loved the letter. I could tell Helena was confused by the letter :D. It is a short chapter though =[ A few errors. Helena, ...

Aweeh, I really liked :D I am going to keep reading, if you keep writing! I really like the guys point of view, it felt as if you can feel ...