garrettmilner

Hey Sienna, I really liked your story, especially the part when he had the flashback. I noticed a lot of punctuation errors though. At the end of names, capitalization and ...

Hey Cameron, I really liked this story because of the way you described Confucianism. Such as “First of all, Confucius was born in 551 BCE and he taught us that ...

Hi Jacob, I like how you blended the the two stories together, it can be tricky to do that. I wonder if you could have formatted your paragraphs better, it ...

Hi Tai! I absolutely love your story! I especially like the way you fit so much in so little, a few paragraphs more and it would have felt like you ...