gabriellasloan

This is hilarious. I was so confused and I was laughing so hard. I love it. Your poems make me smile. Keep it up!

Thanks for the comment! It was very interesting to read. I in no way, shape, or form wanted to portray anything about slavery. I didn't even mean to hint at ...

Woah as in bad or good? :)

Thank you! I'm so honored you liked it.

This poem is interesting. I really liked the last four lines, and the first two lines. I had to read the poem quite a few times, but that's not a ...

It is an allusion to Apollo! I love Greek myths and he is one of my favorites. I actually did not want to capitalize or use punctuation. I usually write ...

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Thank you for the advice!

Woop! Apollo - you got that right! I was hoping somebody would get that. :D The last line is my favorite, too, just because it is very personal to me. ...

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it especially without punctuation or capitalization. I was a little nervous about not using those things, but I think I agree with you. I ...

Thank you, Stella! I'm honored :D I am happy I work the cliche well! It is very confusing with Rai's parents. Sorry about that. I will definitely try to improve ...

I don't mind at all! Thank you :)

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it! Your comments were very helpful. I did choose to format the lines about the footsteps that way. Throughout the novel, there ...

Awwwwwww. This was really happy. I loved it. It made me smile. One more time before I go - awwwww.

This is hilarious. I love the rhyme scene - it really works and seems really effortless. I was smiling the whole time I read this. Well done!