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  • Poetry » Literature, Spiritual Re: The Glass Door

    Thank you for the advice! I must admit I don't have much experience working with poetry without a rhyming scheme, except for the poems I've read but I will be ...

    Oct 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, Spiritual Re: The Glass Door

    Thank you so much! I appreciate the review and I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

    Oct 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, Spiritual Re: The Glass Door

    Thank you so much for your review! Now that you have mentioned I do agree that the deepness escaped me in the final stanza and I will take that into ...

    Oct 16, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: And the ashes still remain

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    This is a very beautiful piece, that I found relayed a sense of anger, sadness but also a sense of calm as if the narrator's mind has left the destruction ...

    Oct 15, 2015
  • Other » Other, Other Re: Ramblings of possible insanity.

    I've never read something quite like this before and I think it's absolutely brilliant. I loved the reference to Picasso and Johnny Depp's quote- pop culture references I find always ...

    Oct 15, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: when you open your heart

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    Hi there, just a quick review, Let me just begin with your poem is great! I loved the emotion that seemed to radiate from the stanzas. Was this poem from ...

    Oct 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, Spiritual Re: The Glass Door

    Thanks guys! And Tammi, thank you so much for the tip! To be honest, I wanted the glass door to represent each individual's perspective and to show that even if ...

    Oct 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, Spiritual Re: The Glass Door

    Thank you so much for the tip :) I'm always looking for feedback from fellow writers and I'm glad to have found a whole society! Dead Poets Society sequel....I do ...

    Oct 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, Spiritual Re: The Glass Door

    Thank you so much for your review!

    Oct 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: Monday night

    Absolutely, Keats is one of a kind!

    Oct 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: Monday night

    Clever! I really liked the last line and your descriptions are almost John Keats like, if you know what I mean!

    Oct 14, 2015


have u ever noticed how ugly rosy-lipped batfish r? and not like in the “aw ur so ugly ur cute” way that like opossums r — no they’re just hideously ugly beasts that should never have existed and r the epitome of evolution fails. the stupidity, blank look, head emptiness. they’re horrible n everyone who likes them r horrible too. they truly have the worst fan-base >:[
— Shady