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Re: The Glass Door
Thank you for the advice! I must admit I don't have much experience working with poetry without a rhyming scheme, except for the poems I've read but I will be ...
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Re: The Glass Door
Thank you so much! I appreciate the review and I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Oct 16, 2015 -
Re: The Glass Door
Thank you so much for your review! Now that you have mentioned I do agree that the deepness escaped me in the final stanza and I will take that into ...
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Re: And the ashes still remain
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Oct 15, 2015
This is a very beautiful piece, that I found relayed a sense of anger, sadness but also a sense of calm as if the narrator's mind has left the destruction ... -
Re: Ramblings of possible insanity.
I've never read something quite like this before and I think it's absolutely brilliant. I loved the reference to Picasso and Johnny Depp's quote- pop culture references I find always ...
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Re: when you open your heart
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Oct 15, 2015
Hi there, just a quick review, Let me just begin with your poem is great! I loved the emotion that seemed to radiate from the stanzas. Was this poem from ... -
Re: The Glass Door
Thanks guys! And Tammi, thank you so much for the tip! To be honest, I wanted the glass door to represent each individual's perspective and to show that even if ...
Oct 15, 2015 -
Re: The Glass Door
Thank you so much for the tip :) I'm always looking for feedback from fellow writers and I'm glad to have found a whole society! Dead Poets Society sequel....I do ...
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Re: The Glass Door
Thank you so much for your review!
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Re: Monday night
Absolutely, Keats is one of a kind!
Oct 15, 2015 -
Re: Monday night
Clever! I really liked the last line and your descriptions are almost John Keats like, if you know what I mean!
Oct 14, 2015
