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No! It is actually a sonnet. As a sonnet, it doesn't rhyme too well. I'll refer to another term, thanks for that and everything. ~Memo

I respect your review on this. However, I don't really agreed with most of your points though. I don't really see the punctuation problem you pointed. And about the capitalization ...

You told me once... in the chatroom, remember? I appreciate your review on this, and yes, you're almost right about the meaning of the title. I'd posted its meaning on ...

*I mean, after the editing...

You're welcomed! Feel free to remind me to review the next chapters. I'd love to. I might find some time to review them, but reminding is a good thing. And ...

Don't worry (fret) too much. It is simply my poet feeling. This thing couldn't be explained easily. Write the rest of this first. Tag me if you can. ^__^__^

It isn't a quote. It is a statement ! This was quite a hard sketch; I'm planning to rewrite it (alongside with many other chapters that I didn't post here). ...

I know I omitted something in my review. I meant, drastic change in the beginning and the end of this chapter. I feel they are way too different. Try to ...

Hi, This is not intended as a review... Umm. I see there are already many reviews and I'll pass on this. This somehow soothes me. Good work. I look forward ...

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But I imagined it firstly as funny~ You're welcomed~~ :D

Lovely. Tis so honest and real. ^^ Why's @Amareth there? It ruins the poem. XD. Kidding... Relax...

NO! That is not what I meant. I just want to say it flows too fast...but that isn't wrong and related to how the conflict has been solved very fast... ...

Hi It is so fast-paced. O.o I like it in a way. Not gonna leave a review though...

NIRE! YOU DUMMY! You left a Youtube link in a review... XD