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  • Poetry » General, General Re: somewhere on the edges of hearing

    Okay, so you were going for an enjamblement I assume? If you were here is a website to look at about enjamblements. It's very helpful. Also the reason capitalizing the ...

    Feb 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Horror, Realistic Re: Until you die

    Okay good. I'm glad somebody noticed it was plagiarized.

    Feb 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Horror, Realistic Re: Until you die

    Wow.... Is there a way to report plagiarism on here?

    Feb 17, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Politics Re: Are You a Feminist?

    I feel like the word feminism isn't saying "Oh let's give more power to women", but rather putting a female essence or female energy in a male dominated society. A ...

    Feb 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, Dramatic Re: A Poem for the Old

    Yeah... I put stanzas, but when I posted it it changed back to the original format... Thanks for your assessment! :)

    Feb 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, Dramatic Re: A Poem for the Old

    Thank you so much!

    Feb 14, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Culture Re: Two Birds, a stone, and the Sky (Chapter One)

    Thanks!!! I'll definitly look into what you said!!! Much appreciated.

    Feb 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, Dramatic Re: A Poem for the Old

    Ughhh... I separated them into stanzas. I don't know why it put it back into one whole thing.... Hmph

    Feb 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: Child's play

    It was also a testimony to Shakespeare... the last line.

    Feb 11, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Culture Re: Two Birds, a stone, and the Sky (Chapter One)

    Yeah I was writing while extremely hungry!!! I often forget to eat when I'm into something. I read it over after I posted and found a few errors! But I'll ...

    Feb 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Eulogy for a friend

    No problem! :)

    Feb 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Culture Re: Two Birds, a stone, and the Sky (Chapter One)

    Awwwww!!!! Thank you so much! You just made my day.

    Feb 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: Psychology of The damned

    Awww, thanks! And sure I could give you pointers! :)

    Jun 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: Psychology of The damned

    Thanks for the review!!! :)

    Nov 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: Psychology of The damned

    Yeah I put 12 but I got a message saying it was made to be for 18 so I couldn't change it back. But yay! Thanks for the review! :)

    Nov 21, 2013


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— Atticus