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Hey first of all I really like your poem. I also think that how you included that persons name was really awesome and creative. Another thing, your poem seemed like ...

Hey I love your title! Whether I read or review something depends on the title and yours really captured me. Anyway I dont get the whole 4th July thing since ...

Hey since everyone else has gone over the faults I'd just like to say that I love this poem! I think it has a very valid point and that your ...

Hey, first of all im gunna go over what I dont get/like. Your rhyme scheme is a tad over the top and it kinda ruins the flow of your poem ...

Hey. I love your story, I really don't have anything to criticise other than why haven't you continued the story, this is one well worth continuing. The only other thing ...

Hey, I love this poem but there is just one thing that doesnt seem quite right and it is this line And the daybreak of tomorrow, Is the ending that ...

Hey i really like this poem. The only part that doesnt seem to fit is the last stanza And nature has grown too old, And laws have all been bent. ...