frogforest

Thank you for writing this review! I definitely see what you mean in the first passage. I think might have been trying a little too hard, and it probably was ...

Thank you so much for the harsh criticism! I definitely feel like it was lacking the power that I wanted it to have. I might rewrite it, or add it ...

Thanks for the feedback! I might change the last sentence by adding semicolons

Thanks for the feedback, I definitely think that I could've added the line "When you say childhood" more. I also hadn't even noticed the typo, so thanks for pointing it ...

I can't believe people said those awful things to you. The poem was written off of personal experiences, so sadly all those things did happen. I loved the feedback, especially ...

Thank you so much! This means a lot to me!

Wow, as I was reading this I was just like "woah". This piece is astounding. I love when you said "Here comes the beast crowned by the people, Who flung ...

Hi! This isn't a review with any constructive criticism, I just wanted to say that this is REALLY well written. The detail is fantastic, and to me it seems like ...