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Re: I Was Wrong [Edited]
Very nice, but i have one question: Who was the guy that they did not want her to trust? I mean the girl in the story seem scary but maybe ...
Oct 19, 2014 -
Re: Escaping Home: Prologue
Hmm........well not bad, i just dont understand the concept of the story. It just seem a little dry, not to be mean or anything, i wish i have seen more ...
Oct 11, 2014 -
Re: Balance - Chapter 1 [First Draft]
Wow! Now that wat i call a good story. It was like i was in the story myself, you have a gift of writing and i really really like it. ...
Oct 9, 2014 -
Re: semantic satiation
That was nice. I love how i felt the darkness, sadness, i felt like who ever u was trying to talk about was sad lonly and needed the light to ...
Oct 9, 2014