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Re: You Don't Understand
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Feb 25, 2009 -
Re: You Don't Understand
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Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Dusk and Dawn
Twin, you know I can't spell! But tsktsk, you STILL haven't edited the epically... fluteluvr77
Feb 19, 2009 -
Re: Proudly Pudgy
Twin!!! You got featured again?!?!?! Unfair, but congrats!!! :D This was reallllly good!! jumelle
Feb 17, 2009 -
Re: Life, Love, and Chocolate (Ch.2)
Yeah, twin I think you're right. We should slow down and add more details. But I like that Erin spills the beans over the phone. It seems to make more ...
Feb 17, 2009 -
Re: Bad Boy
This was a really good poem, and I didn't have any nitpicks that hadn't been covered by the other reviewers. It's one of my new favorites and excellent job. Gold ...
Feb 17, 2009 -
Re: A Loveable Torment
Thanks for the reviews guys! I'll work on it... fluteluvr77
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: Rumors
Wow, this was a really good poem. I had no nitpicks except that you should expand your ideas a little more. Maybe make it a little longer? Gold star for ...
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: Life, Love, and Chocolate (Ch. 1)
Alright, grammar Nazis, I edited it. Once Twin and I start writing again, we'll add the flashbacks, which will probably be right after midterms :(.
Jan 29, 2009
