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Thanks for the imput. I wasn't sure how to define the genre and you're right it is more fantasy. THis is my rough draft and since i first wrote it ...

That is funny. You might want to edit it so that you can really tell who it is passing the note for people who haven't read Harry Potter. Otherwise it ...

THat is so true. Its clever to write something like that and defy that stupid monster. It happens to every body. Keep Writing! Your poem ryhmed nicely and it had ...

That is a cool outlook on a storm. It describes it really well. I think that you should expand it. Your revised version is exactly what I'm talking about!!!!

OMG! That is the best poem ever! (so you don't think I'm crazy, I'm sarcastic a lot)

This is only the chorus and I haven't come up with anything yet but maybe I will. Also this is only the third set of lyrics I've come up with ...

So you like burnt toast. It's not everyone's favorite thing especialy not my brothers, but I like it. You should try a burnt bagel. Your poem was hilorius! I read ...

That is an amazing set of poems. I like how you tied th e gods to that was really cool :shock: I am in shock. It is mind blasting.

There is a series of books called the Underland Chronicles so you might want to change your title. But otherwise awesome!

My dad is very special to me and this is for him.

I would never be ablr to write anything like that. It is so well writen I could see it in a book of musical poems. It is a little suggestive ...

Wow. that was great. Selene Black. that ending was awesome. please write more. the only thing was that you switched from Lily and Rosie on and off.

Well It's pretty good. Maybe if you made more of a finish.Good for standing up for yourself. I can't weight for more!

Wow! That's like the first of the seventh book! I don't think that Harry wouldn't want to go back to Hogwarts but you may have a point. I don't know ...

javascript:emoticon(':lol:')I've edited this Haiku once already. I hope it's okay. "For those who don't no what a Haiku is" it is a 17 syllable poem normally about nature.