fireheartedkaratepup

I'M COMING. LIFE IS GETTING IN THE WAY. *pushes life*

af'kad'fkad'kf I need to review this. REMIND ME LATER.

I really, really like this one. I'm not sure why, exactly, I love this and don't like the last one. Maybe it's the feeling from the poetry. (Works radiate feelings ...

YUM.

*slices with knife* Tension pie?

WE SHALL SEE.

YES IT IS.

AHHHHH IT'S THE POEM Remind me to come back later.

.......Iiii thought you could edit these. *facepalm* Anyway, I meant to add that I love the way you have her phrases in italics, and it's just beautifully constructed, to me. ...

Oh, love the poem. /kicks self

I don't buy that we don't see new faces in our dreams. /endcomment

It isn't utter garbage, and I don't think Griff is right to say that. I happen to like stream of consciousness as a style. If it needs editing, well, fix ...

Yup.

ALLITERATION

I love how people are still reading this.