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You give some very, very helpful advice, and I'm glad you took the time to review this. I'll make good use of your suggestions as soon as I get back ...

Thank you for the review! I'm actually about to post the next chapter...I'm afraid things will get even more muddled, until I get to, say, the seventh chapter or so ...

But if you have a part of a nothing, and nothing is infinite...how can you have part of an infinity? If you can split infinity into parts, that implies that ...

Thanks for the review! :)

But if nothing is an infinite concept, how can there be multiple nothings that are similar to each other?

You're welcome, fellow person (assuming you are one)!

Hi person! I looove this poem - like SubtleSanity said, it's very funny and yet ominous at the same time. Though don't-judge-a-book-by-its-cover is a cliche, this poem is definitely not ...

Hi, thanks for the great review! :) I love your username, by the way. By "pallid" I meant sickly, colorless, etc... as in drained of color, metaphorically dull or meaningless. ...

But if everything is relative, and the directions and gravity are both metaphorical, and metaphors are not literal, meaning they don't actually exist, then the metaphors are nothing; and if ...

But gravity does not exist in deep space, where there are no nearby objects to substantiate a gravitational pull, so your statement is invalid.

Then it wouldn't be going backwards and forwards either!

Wouldn't that be up-and-down? ;)

Thanks! :) You have no idea how relieved your review made me! I thought I'd have to stop after this because it was just too confusing or something...(I have the ...

Thank you for the review :) I'm glad that my poem connected to you.

I made up the word "arow", actually, or at least I think I did :P Good point with the quotations, thanks for noticing! :)