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Thank you for the review! I'll make sure to read some of your stuff too, as soon as I can! :) I just put up another poem, actually.

Oops, I messed up! What I meant by the second-to-last paragraph-thingy was "I finally will go home." (But I don't exist, so it doesn't matter anyway.)

You too!

You too!

Thank you so much for your well-written review, it was wonderfully helpful! :) I'll make sure to use your advice!

Thank you for your excellent review! I need to learn how to use an iron, by the way - I'll try not to burn myself, as I may have to ...

I mean as in breezes, etc. And if this leaves you confused, concerned and scared...good! I've done my job :) Thank you for the review, anyway, I'll make sure to ...

perhaps... "I said, my face as blank as I could make it; but there was a tinge of annoyance coloring my breath." Weird, I know.

I will! :) I'll get more later, anyhow.

No, they were rather small, and probably got caught in the vacuum cleaner and suffered a horrid and grisly death...*sniff*

By vivid imagery...I mean using a lot of detail, so you can picture everything in your mind. That's what my English teacher calls it :) Anyway, the "I told him" ...

Maybe I should put a warning at the beginning - "MAY MAKE BRAIN EXPLODE"

I would have one too, if I could! :) I once had two spiders live under my desk, and I gave them names! One day my mom cleaned out my ...

Thank you for the comment! :) This wasn't exactly supposed to make sense, but perhaps if it made more sense, it would be better writing! I'll make sure to remember ...

I actually don't know quite what I was thinking there, but I wanted it to make you do a double take. Thank you for the comment, by the way, that ...