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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Beginnings

    Thank you! :) Poetry gives you a wonderful kind of freedom, doesn't it?

    Jan 12, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Beginnings

    I greatly appreciate your typographically communicated advisial content! :D

    Jan 12, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Beginnings

    Thanks for reviewing :)

    Jan 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Strolls of the solitary

    You're welcome :)

    Jan 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Dreamer at the End of the Maze

    You're welcome and thanks! :) I have a little editor in my head - he drives me crazy sometimes.

    Jan 9, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Page Seven-Ten

    Thanks for reviewing! :) off to edit now...

    Jan 9, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Page Seven-Ten

    You make some really good points there! I think teachers are some of the most amazing people in the world - I don't agree with the people sitting at the ...

    Jan 9, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Beginnings

    The paragraph was an accident, actually! I don't know - maybe I'll keep it after all! As for "fury of mice", it was supposed to be a sort of oxymoron ...

    Jan 8, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Beginnings

    Thank you for taking the time to review my poem so thoroughly, you made some very good points! :)

    Jan 8, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Beginnings

    Thanks! The paragraph thing was an accident, actually. I'm silly. You have some good criticism there! I'll make good use of it! :)

    Jan 8, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Beginnings

    Haha, I published this at 6 in the morning and forgot to do the stanza-code thing! Wow. I'll go fix that now! Ha. Anyway, thanks for the review! :)

    Jan 8, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Page Seven-Ten

    Absolutely so. Well, somewhat, anyway.

    Jan 7, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Next-pectations

    Thanks for the advice, you're right! I was leery of that part myself, but I was half-delusional due ability to time-travel, in which I look up two seconds later and ...

    Jan 7, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Next-pectations

    Thanks for the review! My art teacher inspired this poem, and her class makes me think more than any other class I have in school. Geometry included. Thanks for reviewing...again... ...

    Jan 7, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Next-pectations

    Thanks for the critique, it was very helpful and I'll be sure to use it! :) I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. There are few things more pleasant than being ...

    Jan 7, 2014


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