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Re: agora
thank you for reading it and yea the beginning is meant to really grab the readers attention and interest and thanks again for reading it
May 7, 2012 -
Re: untitled
thank you everyone for the feed back it comes much appreciated and i will take all suggestions and advice to heart so thanks again
Sep 15, 2011 -
Re: ode to my bed
i really liked it it was an interesting subject you talked about but to me you pulled it off just perfectly just perfectly hope you keep writing so that i ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: One Mistake
i liked your poem a lot it gives out of emotion tells a story about what you feel great job keep writin
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: Wire Hearts and Paper Dreams (1)
its really good and i like your idea
Nov 7, 2009 -
Re: What is love?
great poem thought it expressed great emotion and had great flow
Oct 30, 2009