felistia

Thanks for the review. I have fixed the mistakes.

Thanks for reviewing again. I will fix the mistakes right away. Oh by the way I have posted the next chapter.

Thank you for the review.

Thanks for the review. I have changed the inconsistences.

Thanks for the review. I have corrected the punctuation, I think.

thank you for following my story. It is a real help and I will apply the changes when I have time.

Thanks for the review. I will apply the changes when I have time.

Thanks for the idea and review. I am going to expand when I have time.

thanks for the review. I have changed some of the writing. I can't work around the pottery vase.

thanks for the review.

Thanks for the review. I have changed the problems. I like some of your ideas, but some of the others don't work with the story plan.

thanks

Good idea I will expand on it when I get the chance. Thank you for the review.

Thanks for the review. I have removed the picture.