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Thank you for the review. As always it was helpful. About the line you were confused with, Emerald did say all that. Anyway thank you for another great review. :D

Thank you for another great review. I have fixed all the problems and slashed out the info dump. Thanks again. :D

Thank you so much for the review. It was really helpful. Did you get the part about Zoltar not being an acid fang and all the other shadow talons are? ...

Thanks for the review. Sorry about the late reply. I will be sure to correct the problems. :D

Thanks for another great review. I will be sure to go back and do some editing and fix the mistakes. Thanks again. :D

Thanks for another great review I will be sure to make a few adjustments. :D

Thank you so much for another review. I will be sure to go ahead and fix the problems and work on the emotions. Thanks for all the great information. :D

Thank you so much for a great review. I will fix the problems right away and I hope to see you again soon.

Thank you so much for the review. I will be sure go and fix the problems right away. :D

Hi IHI, thanks for the review. I understand about the ocean and changed that, but I can't change the neck and head bit since the poem has a rhyming pattern, ...

Hi Chrissy321 thanks for the review. About making a story about the end of the world, I have already done a poem story very similar to it called the Serpent ...

Thank you so much for the review. I am glad that you liked the chapter. :D

Thanks for another great review. I will be sure to go back and add some thoughts and to fix the mistakes. :D

Thanks for the review. I am glad you liked the chapter. :D

Thanks for another great review. I will be sure to fix the problems. :D