felistia

Forget that I said that. It's from MoonFlower my sister. :D

Thanks for the review. I will go back and edit my chapter and will probably join the two chapters together like you said. Thanks again. It was very helpful. :D

Thank you so much for the review. I know that this chapter was awkward on the whole. I spent over three weeks trying to write it and had a bit ...

PP.S could you please hit the like button. :D

Thank you so much for the review. I'll go back and fix the problems. :D P.s Did you read the prologue. I think you'd like it. :D

Thanks for the review. I'm glad to hear that you liked it. I'll go back through and look for the grammar mistakes. Would you like me to let you know ...

Thank you for your opinion. I'm glad to hear that you liked it. :D Would you like me to let you know when the next chapter it out? P.s Could ...

Okay so if the brothers where the ages that I thought they were then they weren't over done. It's just that if they where older than it would be a ...

That's great. Please tell me when you decide to pick up and I'll come and review you. :D

Hi KingQueenKnave, thanks for the review. The creation message wasn't subliminal. I did say in the poem's description right at the top that it was spiritual. The whole poem was ...

I love this story. :D Please tell me you are going to carry on with it. :D

Okay so this is the weirdest review I've ever got and frankly wasn't helpful at all, but I'll humor you and answer the questions. I just want to make it ...

I just want to say that this is reminding me almost word for word of the Zootopia scene with the fox, the rabbit cop and buying a jumbo pop. If ...

thanks for the review. :D