felistia

Thank for another review. I do agree with what you're saying and will get to editing as soon as possible. I've got quite a bit to do. P.s if you ...

Thank you for two review in one day. I love that. :D Yet again you make perfect sense. I've got quite a bit of editing ahead. I love it! I'm ...

Thank you for all this wonderful criticism. I've need this so badly. I agree with everything you've said and I'll get to editing as soon as possible. I might have ...

Thank so much for the review. I'll get to fixing up this chapter as soon as possible. This is a very new part of the story that I just thought ...

Thanks for the review. I do see your point about the whole too hot thing. First off, I think I should include a map in the first chapter as that ...

Thanks again for another review. I do agree on the whole Zoltar finding the stone tablet issue. It does seem a bit far out now that I think about it. ...

Thank you so much for another review. I'll get to editing as soon as I can. I'll work on Zoltar dialogue a bit, but the reason he changed from respectful ...

Thank you so much for another review. It's so great to have consistent reviewers. On the part about why Zoltar stood up for himself. He'd never actually fought in real ...

Do you think it would be a good idea to place picture of character and the creatures they meet at the bottom of the chapter when we come across them. ...

Thank you so much for yet another review. (You're a bit early today. :D) I'm glad you like Felistia. She's the easiest character to write since she's the closest to ...

Thank you so much for reviewing my story again. I'm so happy to see that you think it's improved. I'll get onto editing those mistakes as soon as possible. Thanks ...

Okay I'll try to include some information on why his going, but I can't include too much as it would feel like an info dump. Please wait a little while ...

@Carlito. Sorry. Spelled it wrong in the last paragraph above. :D

Thank you so much for another review. I find my self staying up at night waiting for them. :D I've gone and edited the first chapter through to the 5 ...

Thanks again for a review. (keep not getting notifications for your reviews). I'm so happy that you're liking the story. I hope you carry on reading and thanks again. Have ...