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Hi BaileyTheHoosier, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks our eyes bright red, like the kind of red you imagine a tomato to be. ...

Hi Hattable, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks turning my gaze back out the window and sinking back into my pillows, I sighed ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Theme: I really liked the theme of winter you had going through out this poem. It gave ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks He wasn’t prone to crying, but today was an exception. When all at once there were ...

Hi NympheaLily, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks I've never told Sparrow, but there is a secret... a terrible secret that could change ...

Hi NympheaLily, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks "You would never hurt me," she said, stepping forward again. My hands shook as I ...

Hi NympheaLily, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks "You will! Oh thank you random stranger!" She hugged me Okay so I don't think ...

Hi NympheaLily, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks "You. Did. WHAT?!" Maybel exploded. The next morning, I sat at my window, So this ...

Hi marlowbaines, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks I he was but then she looked at him the beginning of the sentence was ...

Hi marlowbaines, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D grammar and punctuation "Being an angel doesn't mean that I can just flaunt around showing off ...

Hi soundofmind, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Quick note: I've gone back and read your other two chapter so that I know what's ...

Hi Ashley123, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks I trembled in my sleep, feeling as miserable as I did in my reality. The ...

Hi Ashley123, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks The lights in my room were on as in the hallway as doctors’ and nurses’ ...

Hi Ashley123, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks He lied me back on the mattress and repositioned the IV and oxygen tubes that ...

Hi Ashley123, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D So since this is in two chapters, I'm going to review each separately. Just a quick ...