fatalkiss

I think you should warn the reader if you're going to have sex in your story. Just a thought. Anyway, noticed a few errors. Please spell out numbers. The title ...

Interesting poem. I'm guess it's in free verse since it doesn't read like a lot of poems I've read. I like the emotion you put into it. Very raw. Nice ...

Interesting plot. I think you might want to put space in between your paragraphs but I could be wrong. I just joined today and don't understand this site yet.