fallenangel

Oh my. I LOVED IT. To answer the question at the top, my first impression was that they were family related, just from the image of a little boy with ...

Somebody likes the Twilight Series!!! Sorry, but I got a major Twilight vibe reading that, which is okay seeing as I absolutely love the idea of vampires. Try to make ...

This poem was sickeningly good. I loved it! I love the metaphors and comparisons, at first it caught me offguard and I had to read it again... I really like ...

...WOW. That was so good! I really liked it a lot. I really couldn't stop reading, and I'm honestly annoyed it ended that way. I want to find out what ...

.......sigh....... I loved it!!!! I really feel like you captured a moment that enthralls the reader the most. Emotion is a hard thing to just write, and what you've expressed ...

This is the first work of yours I've had the opportunity to read, and I must say I liked it very much :) Even though I haven't read the beginning ...

This is good, but it could be better :) Honestly, you've got a really good start, I really like your comparisons with the sky...the ground, etc... but I've got to ...

Fabulous job! I really enjoyed reading that, except for one little tiny thing... [quote] She turned to see who had been so compassionate. Her eyes widened with surprise when she ...

Wow, great job! I really enjoyed that. I think your main issues are formatting and perhaps a little confusion in the flow. The writing seems a little informal, perhaps you ...

I think you've got a pretty thing going here, there's just a few problems with rhythm, try making it flow a little more. I also think that you could work ...

Wow, fabulous job. I really enjoyed that, kind of reminded me of The Notebook--only flipped. Your style of writing is great, it put a strong image in my mind. The ...

I had kind of a hard time of figuring out what was going on. I really think this has potential though, perhaps it's a little too personal. It could use ...