fairyreader

I really enjoyed this. Defitnaly a unique idea You did repeat yourself in some bits like here: "For the last few nights Mr Pepper had had his shop robbed, of ...

I really enjoyed this. It was perfectly introduced and well written. I love how you descriped carcter. You should go and cheack your format because halway through the sentece it ...

Hey! This was defitnaltly a great start! If this is your first chapter than I highly recommned you carry on writting and then end it with a cliff hanger. Maybe ...

Hey! I really loved this! It defiantly caused the reader to question what they belive in. I would highly recommned using paragraphs. Just to help breack the story down because ...