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  • Short Story » Realistic, Spiritual Re: My Grandpa Is Dead

    I'd like to say that I hope you are doing well after your loss, and that I seen my greatest condolences. Your piece, on the other hand, is very stylized ...

    Jan 17, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Feather [1]

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    Ooh this has a lot of potential. I like be the way the story flows, it's very stylized and intruding. You could work on trya no to avoid repeating words ...

    Jan 17, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Feather [1]

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    Ooh this has a lot of potential. I like be the way the story flows, it's very stylized and intruding. You could work on trya no to avoid repeating words ...

    Jan 17, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Feather [1]

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    Ooh this has a lot of potential. I like be the way the story flows, it's very stylized and intruding. You could work on trya no to avoid repeating words ...

    Jan 17, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Feather [1]

    Ooh this has a lot of potential. I like be the way the story flows, it's very stylized and intruding. You could work on trya no to avoid repeating words ...

    Jan 17, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: My Obsessive Compulsive Disorder

    This is a very interesting and heavy piece, I live with slight OCD myself and I know how distracting ad hard to live with it is. As for critique, the ...

    Dec 13, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Realistic Re: Strange Beings, Those Humans Are

    Thanks so much for the good critique! Sorry for the errors I wrote all this down sort of fast, just to get it out, you know? I just joined this ...

    Dec 13, 2016


I have a Gumbie Cat in mind, her name is Jennyanydots; Her coat is one of the tabby kind,with tiger stripes and leopard spots.
— T.S. Eliot, Old Possum's Book of Practical Cats