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This poem sounds like something strait out of the sunset tree by the mountain goats. That being said, well done. Its modern and accessible without being childish in the least, ...

Muse, our teacups are broken. Did you have to push the shelf over? im sure this has personal meaning but i thought the slight change in tone was a good ...

this is a good poem, though i think this belongs in lyric poetry. anyhoo, i cant crtisize the point of the poem, its a good universal idea and there aint ...

are agree with carelessaussie. You have some stunning visuals and great lines, i feel a few of the rhymes were forced and in the age of free verse you can ...

In a world of half baked manifestos and sound bite revolution, its wonderful to read an even handed and well grounded essay about a issue that should have little public ...

Alot of this essay seems to hang on the argument that we are sophisticated and wise beings, that we somehow are above the natural law that guides the world. We ...

Wonderful work, goddamn wonderful work. This reminds me in a very small way of Stevens' "Thirteen Ways of Looking at A Blackbird" or some such. Its a fascinating study indeed. ...

Oh man i enjoyed this poem thoroughly. There is only one real person you really should write for, that person being yourself, a writers only real responsibility is to his ...

Ho Hum I do hear that pain hurts, an awful lot. But it does not warrant a poem about it. An artful ironic use of cliche this is not Cliches ...